The eye sees only what the mind is prepared to comprehend – Henri Bergson
Marco – The Aphol
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What a twist!
😀 incredible, isn’t it?
Marco this is great. Not what I was expecting at all!
Great story – I love the way you tell it from just one perspective!
Thank you Tobias! The lone perspective was a focal point for the whole story to work, i’m really happy you noticed!
Cool – I love the way you ended the series!
Really fun! I did not expect that ending. The suspense was great, though. And I loved the subtlety of the clock hours and the light changing while so much else stayed static. Well done!
WOW! That did not at all go how I expected, and really took me by surprise. I love the twist and will be thinking about all the things it could mean for the rest of the day.
I also love all the little details you included like the changing clock. Nicely done!